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Broken_Heart
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-07-31 03:34 PM


This is the End

Still you play me
Like a ball I feel
Throwing me away
Making me bounce
Catching me fall
And throwing me way
Friends you said we
Forever would be
Yet not answering
My last hope calls

I feel nothing
I feel death within
You didn't tell me
But you slept with him
How could you lie?
Leaving me in
My tortured dream
I you know this
I am drowning in this
Lake of sorrow
So go away again

My sorrows have overcome
My senses and my soul
My heart aches with freedom
My body hurts for your love
Yet you choose another
Still lying everyday
I take up that knife
And make my wrist bleed
Taking my life forever
This is the end...

© Copyright 2000 Jean Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
Eloise
Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
1 posted 2000-07-31 03:58 PM


Very sad and heart wrenching, but nothing is worth a life in the end.  Well written.  Hang in there, things will look up.
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
2 posted 2000-07-31 04:06 PM


There is nothing more important than our lives. You did a nice job writing, but remember it will get better..Im going to keep telling you that ok? Keep writing and we will be here for you!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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