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This Pane of Glass
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This Pane of Glass |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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This Pane of Glass The pane I look out from this chair of words echoes the sunlit leaf in dust crusted glitter The dark shadow sways a winter glass dancer and entrancing grace of substance growing leaf of splendor just beyond greenly gamely plays the wind You are locked in rhythm yet do not touch you are separate yet alone Which is less or more of real in this vision my heart is touched by both one is like a blossom the other like a dream In heart this pain of glass is sharp This love of true and forever can still be free embrace is such circumference that the heart can’t measure this shadow that touches the crack I left open for expansion in life long quest Oh shadow you inhabit my core add dimension to my vision you must lay with me in this confusion that opens me to hesitation when all I want is to see My heart is glass and pain is not diaphanous its shattering is silent opening lets all the fragile chambers cry [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ 'Oh shadow you inhabit my core add dimension to my vision you must lay with me in this confusion that opens me to hesitation when all I want is to see' You are definitely multi-dimensional, my friend. I enjoyed this look at the pain through the pane. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There is so much here, Martie, love the imagery of the glass--the invisible separation--the yearning in this is as evident as finger marks on the glass...and I guess you figured out by now that I really loved this beauty... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Martie,...thank you for letting me peek in. Mmm, I love how this fell onto me, (though it tugs at me now with the contents). It's nice to see you here,...it's nice to read you again. You have beauty in your mind. Be well M. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh shadow you inhabit my core add dimension to my vision you must lay with me in this confusion that opens me to hesitation when all I want is to see My heart is glass and pain is not diaphanous its shattering is silent opening lets all the fragile chambers cry ...... The pane of glass is clear in its showing of pain, Martie... regards, sudhir |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Incredible, rich, sad.. love the way you express yourself. Catalinamoon Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art. Merrit Malloy |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow Martie a cleverly woven poem. very sadly stated. Take care, thanks for sharing and I hope that everything is ok Hugs ~ "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
This was done with alot of details and wonderful imagery. Excellent writing!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Martie..this is really beautiful. So eloquent, so well said. Hardrock |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Thanks for enjoying my pain...er...pane...gosh that sounds funny. Serenity--thank you for the wonderful comment. Spitfire--what a lovely thing to say..thank you. Sudhir--thank you for seeing through my glass. catalinamoon--thank you for such a wonderful reply. brian--I know that you know that sometimes things are okay and sometimes not...thanks for the hug! Deborah--I'm so glad that you liked the poem! Hardrock--thank you for reading and replying to my poem...I admire your poetry very much. |
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