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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
This is where I let my mind take me on a bad pain day... My recollections All portray.. My childhood memories In a harmonious way Life was like a melody Pure and sweet With tones of contentment The world at my feet Each summer's day All gift-wrapped in fun Together we played.. Skimming rocks in the sun Falling nighttime would bring Campfire tales Mystery lingered Our faces turned pale I can still feel the forces As I re-trace my flight The glow of Mom's radiant smile.. As she kissed me goodnight The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Deb...such a beautiful trip down the trails of your childhood. I recalled the times I sat around a campfire...and my mom's kiss. Nice story...excellent poem. Hardrock |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Aah no finer memories than those precious childhood ones, campfires, jokes with the family, a cuddle with Dad, a good night kiss from Mom, each and every one special just like this poem. Well done  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwwwww yeah childhood memories are the BEST! Well done herePeace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
What a touching reminder of days gone by~~ you've got a very charming write here... Enjoyed it a lot. *S* |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is so sweet... very nicely done |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Deborah, An excellent trip down memory lane... and where best to park but at Childhood Street... regards, sudhir |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
How lovely! Awwwwwwww! I got warm fuzzies from this one! Great job! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is so beautiful Deb, and even more so if it is the positive result of pain. How do you do that? Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a beautiful journey down yesterday's path. Don't they just warm the heart? |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Thank you everyone...and Lotharingia, I guess I have lived with pain so long, I try to find a way to channel it, and thinking back to the happiest of times helps, it really does. It doesn't cure it but my mind is better, and then somehow Im better. The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Deb, A lovely poem. I like it. I actually have been thinking of writing one simular to this. Wasnt life so darn simple then??? What in the heck happend? I do like this one. LarBear |
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