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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Here we go again, Repitition making our heads spin, Once around, we slowly float... Two times occurred, quicker and harsh. Why do we allow this? Time consumed, Feelings wasted, Why do we condone this? Soon truth will appear, Lies and scandal are crushed, Our heads can stop spinning, Dizziness will cease. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I'm not too clear on what this poem is about but it i still like it but i have yet to truly figure put it's meaning --gin "There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Ouch. I feel like I just fell off the roundabout, wizzy dizzy or got caught in a revolving door. Nice poem though. Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Very neat......very interesting....Good job!  -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I crushed on a loser guy for way to long. The meaning is very simple, I was remaining in a repetitive sitch with a dumb man... I wish it were more than that... but basically that's it. Thanks for the comments. Jenn |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh the "dances" we do in relationships, yes, round and round. Great job, liked the poem alot!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem my fine fathered friend. enjoyed this read very much and please check your email. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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