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Nikolette Sadness
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-07-30 04:39 AM


here i go just gonna think some more...

~salt in my eye~

too many tears i've cried for you,
salt in my eye.
these emotions are so true,
the way you make me feel
is more than i want.
i dont want to fall for you,
the stupid things i do!
i'm falling asleep now,
your face is in my mind.
i dont want to cry for you,
salt in my eye.
try to push it away,
but love always stays.

      Nikolette Sadness



i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
1 posted 2000-07-30 04:49 AM


How sad, Niko! And very good!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Lynne Dale
Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria
2 posted 2000-07-30 09:19 AM


This is very poetic and yes you can write.
Kethry

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.


SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-07-30 01:19 PM


~I agree,...'tis very sad and very good. Salt in My Eye,...I love that. Welcome here!!! Be well NS. *Peace.

[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-30-2000).]

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
4 posted 2000-07-30 02:46 PM


well i voted again and this is also very good and i hope to see alot more from you. i enjoyed this one alot and hope you keep it up you are a good writer. and please check your email

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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