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The Night Draws to a Close
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The Night Draws to a Close |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
see if you can figure this one out... < !signature-->~Night Draws to a Close~ the sheet is like a curtain, drawing after the virgin performance. thoughts run rampant. the reviews will come in the morning. sleep wil come now, yet not with ease. not with thoughts like these. what did the important people think of this, the first night. sleep now and rise to the morn. farewell sweet love sleep do i now. and innocence do i mourn. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. [This message has been edited by Nikolette Sadness (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i guess no one else did but i like it! heheheh i actually do and thats strnge for me to like something i wrote hmmmyeah ~the author~ |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
errrm. Losing your cherry? Maybe? Don't put yourself down so much, Niko, I love your stuff! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
its sort of a mix between that, my first play, and tonight,,,cuz i wnat everyone to like my stuff i'm a loer i know but i like it when ppl sya they like my stuff because that the one thing i can do...write. ~the author~ i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i know its pretty lame to reply to your own poetry but this is the onyl poem i have ever written that i liked...and i would really like to see what you all think...the poem is really not as crude as you may think.... tahnx ~the author~ i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Enchanted Star; I certainly hope that your reply was a joke between friends for if it was not you should be ashamed. If you do not like a poem then offer CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Such is always welcome to a writer who wishes to grow. I hope that all who post here want to grow in their talent. I EXPECT that all who reply will be helpful and if not, then cordial. Sing while you may |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I'm definitely voting for this one and putting it in my library. WOW!!!!!!!!! This is soooooo.......(sigh) The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
thank you veyr much jeffrey...  and everyone else Nik i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is excellent writing indeed, Nikolette... regards, sudhir< !signature--> You just stood there screaming, fearing no one was listening to you They say the empty can rattles the most, the sound of your voice must soothe you ~Metallica - My Friend of Misery [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
In the morning is the sun a refreshing way another race is run the morning has come All around the goblins die and the birds grow wings and they begin to fly The darkness and the fantasy have past into eternity. (Hello again, i prefer verse to replies it is easier for me and i try to merit my right to read the piece by giving the poet a poem in return.) Oh Danny boy, the pipes, the pipes are calling From glen to glen, and down the mountain side The summer's gone, and all the roses falling 'Tis |
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Chere Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 18 |
A most touching poem* Thank you for sharing . . . Chere* |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
This is a great poem. i really enjoyed this piece from you as always you are a great poet. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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