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Dark Poetry #2

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Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-07-30 03:44 AM

this is an old one that i wrote...it turned into a screen name...~loveless~...

~loveless~lifeless~careless~hopeless~helpless~

love is gone.
life is gone.
care i not.
have no hope.
i need help.

Nikolette Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-07-30 04:02 AM

I like this little one, really clever.
And since it is old I won't bore you with epistles on future love which is sure to come

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

misscris
Junior Member

since 2000-07-17

Posts 27
Leawood, KS, USA

2 posted 2000-08-03 04:56 PM

Short and sweet, or should I say sour? Powerfully directed.
Well done.
misscris

'somethings arrive on their own mysterious hour, on their own terms and not yours, to be seized or relinquished forever.

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