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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-07-30 03:25 AM


placement in life and society has always been important...i dont know why.I dont know if i understand my writing but i dont understand placement either.

~Placement~

My placement confuses me,
abuses me,
maybe they are using me?
People are frightning,
not like darkness.
A little bit like lightning,
striking at the most in-opertune times.
Placement pressure tightning,
status hard to find.
Society is in turmoil,
hate is taking over,
we wait for love to recoil.
People are frightning,
alot like lightning.
Strike to hurt a being,
in a time without feeling.
People do bad things,
say bad things,
have bad feelings,
In this life placement is a focus.
You'll never know
where you go,
in a world of falasies.
Best hope is in your fantasies.

         Nikoletter Sadness




i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 183

1 posted 2000-07-30 03:28 AM


extremely well put.  I think your poem makes tons of sense and applies directly to our world, sadly it's true.  Thanks for the work.
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