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Spill Blood of Ink |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I'll take this pen that has been honed relentless scrape on heart of stone... these words I write, my life reclaimed spill blood of ink-- relinquish cane... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
simply awesome...HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
bravo Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow Serenity, concise and wonderful. WOW again. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Short and powerful. Wow.Excellent poem. Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Here, here! I agree. Simply marvelous Serenity. Ooh,...it's got strength and uummph! Glad to see you drop in. Be well. *Peace. |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
YES!!!! I love it....... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thank all for your kindness, and I like it here, hope ya'll don't mind if I hang out more often...thanks again. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Nice to drink your poem! Yes you can hang around with us vampires! There's lot's of room in this cave! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow--so much said in so few words...love the last two lines...so perfect! |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
Nice work here. I've always thought that more is said with fewer words. I am impressed. Sing while you may |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Serenity~ "Mind"?! why, Honerd is more like it!!! Great poem! More! More! ~Sash~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Well, you can 'hang out' but ya' can't hide ! 'Mom' will find ya' everytime ! Cool poem, gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Serenity, Very clever... relentless scrape on heart of stone... these words I write We all hope to scratch that surface and have our words felt. In this verse, yours are easily registered. Very nice job of the ink spill... *S* EWD |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent work with this, serenity... regards, sudhir |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Echoing the sentiments of the rest, great, intense piece, and please stay and do more. catalinamoon |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all for your warmth...I knew I loved the dark...smiles to you all... |
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LOTR Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 68New Jersey |
Whoa! Amazing how so few words can say so much! Great job |
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