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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
i wrote this about him...the only man i ever loved. ~Him~ I fear his presence, I fear his every word. The hidden meanings behind his speech. Fearing his emotions, and all the looks he gives, such fear fills me, I want him with me. Afraid tolove him, want to hold him. Hes every where I am, hes not even a man. I fear his every move, I love his everything. Hes in my every being. I fear him. I love him. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Enchanted Star Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 14New Port Richey, FL |
Your talented.....it reminds me of a guy I use to like. I wanted him to look at me all the time and when he did I didn't know what to do with myself. CindyLuC |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
hey....very very interesting...i like it! keep it up! !MiSeRyDivine~~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i like this one alot and the idea behind it. i like how you give the flip side to all you write in this poem good idea. loved the work I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Nick_UK Junior Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 10 |
I think I've read all of yours now... Keep them coming. You're work is most excellent. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
yuppers i like this one too  The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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