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Nikolette Sadness
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since 2000-07-29
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port richey fl.

0 posted 2000-07-29 11:17 PM


i once was in love and i was happy..now you can call me sadness.

~Feelings~
feelings that i feel
wondering if they're real.
all just kept inside,
not knowing where they hide.
I don't know where they are
running still so far.
wishing for emotion,
finding no token,
inside my eyes
seeing all the lies.
holding only shadows
in the dark of night.
watching as my mind goes,
just beyond the light.
              nikolette sadness



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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-29 11:28 PM


Hi, welcome to DP, we will cheer you up, or at least try to. Lovely poem, sorry you are in that state, it is very familiar to me as well. Keep writing and let it out, maybe it will help.
Peace
Catalinamoon

Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art.
Merrit Malloy

DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
2 posted 2000-07-29 11:58 PM


welcome to passions...great writing here...hope to read more of you

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-07-30 02:53 PM


well well well just another great one from you and i voted again. i enjoyed this read alot i think everyone had been there and can relate. do keep it up my friend and i plan to read all of your work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-07-30 06:24 PM


When the time is right you will feel all the feelings...the hurt, the anger, the sadness...hope you are getting in touch with your feelings...take care...James
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