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AnGeLiX17
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since 2000-06-05
Posts 46
Salisbury, NC

0 posted 2000-07-29 09:30 PM


Best friends forever we'd always say,
never knowing "forever" would end someday,
now I sit here crying, I miss you so bad,
all I have left is the picture on the wall and the memories we've had,
don't you worry about me, I'll be fine,
your life is over and done now I have to finish mine,
I'm writing this I guess to let you know,
there's still a part of you that I'll never let go,
and as I place this red rose on your headstone,
I realize that I'm now all alone...


© Copyright 2000 Kristi - All Rights Reserved
Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2000-07-29 10:12 PM


I LOVED  this poem.  i had a friend die a few years ago, a best friend, a boyfriend,  and i miss him with all my heart.  this poem reminded me of how i was when he died.  i actually cried over him again, it has been a long time.  your poem really touched me, thank you for sharing it.  i wrote a poem about my friend a few days ago if you want to read it i think i called it "i had to say good bye" i hope it touches you the way your poem did me.
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