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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2000-07-29 07:35 PM


He walked out into a world without faith for some
Fresh air.

But instead all he got was sadness and mourning.

Looking back, all he saw were pebbles and mangled trees,
Where the sea of faith once laid, with it's sweet Water.

He tried to walk back inside but it was too late.

The walls closed upon him.

He was now in the world, and in the cold.

He stood watching, as the men and women walked by,

Glazed looks in their eyes.

He tried to greet one of them, but no one would talk
To him.

Each was too busy in pursuit of the
Epemeral god.



We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are

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Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-29 08:30 PM


Fractal..interesting concept of those who stray from their God.  Hardrock
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