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Abbi2001
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1
Chicago, Illinois, USA

0 posted 2000-07-29 07:31 PM


I thought about you again today.
Wonder why you went away.
I think about you everyday, waiting, watching, hoping you'll show and it's all a dream.
I want to wake up.
I want to feel free again.
I know that your watching me,
I can feel you beside of me.
Sometimes I think that I see you,
I look but your not there.
The times that we spent together were great.
It all seems like such a waste.
If I knew that Christmas was going to be
the last time we would have ever talked,
I'd have said a longer good-bye.
I try to remember all the laughter,
but only end up in tears.
The hurting has subsided,
but the pain is still there.
If you get another chance at life,
make sure that you live this one full.
You didn't get much of a chance in the last one.
Thinking back to January and how you went away.
I feel like I've been abandonded.
As though no one cares.
I've thought about killing myself,
I would know at least someone up there.
It just seems easier to give up.
I want to be with you.
I want your friendship again.
I want to laugh and cry together.
I can't since you went away.
I feel so bad for not getting closer to you.
I know that I had the chance.
Now the closest that I get to you,
is when you watch me,
and I dream of you.

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Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-29 08:37 PM


We are promised no tomorrows, so we have to make the best of today.  Live your life to the fullest...death comes soon enough.  Nice tribute to your friend.  Hardrock
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-29 11:33 PM


Very touching, I know your friend is aware of your love. Take care.
Catalinamoon

Practice can make anything perfect...even grief can become an art.
Merrit Malloy

DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
3 posted 2000-07-29 11:55 PM


beautiful words to your friend...I'm sorry for your loss

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

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