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Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-29 04:58 PM


    I have been many places
    And seen all the worst
            The
          Lurkers
            Are
         The beast's
That strike you when your alone
          Or hurt
  They live in the darkness
      Of night and day
            And
Follow behind stocking you
         Like prey.


I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-07-29 05:09 PM


Or they read your poetry and don't reply!   Very scary!
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-29 08:28 PM


I think all of us in DP have been beset by the lurkers at one time or another.  Interesting view, JJ.  Hardrock
lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
3 posted 2000-07-30 02:11 AM


Oh yes!
The lurkers are everywhere and come in many guises! Good one, Havoc. ('scusing the name, it's shorter than Jeremiah and I love it)


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



Nikolette Sadness
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Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337
port richey fl.
4 posted 2000-07-30 02:18 AM


as we are prey also be we lurkers?
in a sense bes it true.
          Nikolette Sadness

(cindy says i try to be poetic but it just comes out)


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Xeonox
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Senior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764
CA, USA
5 posted 2000-07-30 02:55 AM


You are the master of the short poetry. From you I have learned what I could understand of your magical ablilty to write. I bow a thousand bows my friend.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
6 posted 2000-07-30 02:33 PM


thank you all for your replies and i will be reading your work on my lab top when i get up there and right before i move from here. thanks again all of you

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

7 posted 2000-07-30 03:24 PM


Okay, ya made me lurk--I mean "look"!  I liked the creepy, "somebody's-watchin'-me" feel to this...intriguing.
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
8 posted 2000-07-30 04:26 PM


Great piece JJ. (should "stocking" be "stalking"??

Enjoyed...

jwesley

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