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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-29 04:25 PM

As i sit here listening to these
walls speak. I hear a door squeek
And out of the darkness come's a
Man pale and thined, cobwebs in hair,
Cut's on skin. He takes his path and
Walks it not knowing it's end.
Passing through another door
Amen.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

1 posted 2000-07-29 06:17 PM

I really don't know what to say to you here
But I do love this poem.
Only I dont know if he's going to death
or another stage in life
Or maybe the next world
Great work
Blue

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

2 posted 2000-07-29 08:40 PM

JJ..great imagery here. This is dark..and yet it has such light to it. Rare piece indeed. Hardrock

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-07-30 02:15 AM

Scary one, Havoc.
And very well written:
"listening to these
walls speak"
I love that. Shadows come to life!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

4 posted 2000-07-30 02:21 AM

i bow before you for i have met my maker, and be he you.
Nikolette Sadness

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2000-07-30 02:53 AM

Back to teach an immature poet like me some tricks huh Jeremiah? Great job as always.< !signature-->

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 07-30-2000).]

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

6 posted 2000-07-30 02:20 PM

thank you all for your replies. it make me feel good that you all enjoy my work so much and i might just post some more before i pack this up today. thanks again my dear friends.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

7 posted 2000-07-30 02:23 PM

~JJ,...Mhhm...indeed a winner, this is. Haunting AND enjoyable. Great work. Be well J. *Peace.

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