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Broken_Heart
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-07-29 05:24 AM


Hey everyone! I have to thank you all for the support you have given me in this short period I have been here... Thanks a lot, guys and girls...
Sincerely Broken_Heart

My Roses are Dead

In my garden of life
I sit crying alone
I saw my roses blossom
And one day they died
My love was shattered
No one is around
To see my garden
I made for her
She is no more
My roses are dead

In my garden of life
I feel desolated
I am barely alive
On the brink of death
With no one to love
As did my roses die
So did my hopes wither
My dreams crumble
And my love dissapear
I am all alone
She left me forever
She has died for me
As forever in my garden
My roses are dead...




Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...


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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-29 07:02 AM


B_H..Sad..but beautiful.  Your roses will bloom again in the springtime of your life.  Take care....Hardrock
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
2 posted 2000-07-29 08:21 AM


I agree the sadness is felt, but still a beautiful poem, and your roses will bloom again, even if it doesn't feel that way!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Lynne Dale
Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria
3 posted 2000-07-29 09:28 AM


This is so sad and tender. Remember though ... "can spring be far behind."
Be well
Kethry

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.


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