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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-29 01:21 AM


Nothing But My Thoughts

I squeeze my eyes
tightly shut.
I press my fingers
against them,
making the darkness I see
complete.
The darkness
begins to fade,
to part,
to drift,
to lighten,
like a foggy veil
pushed into oblivion
by the wind.

I'm sitting under a tree,
listening;
the breeze sighs
through the trees,
leaves rustle,
shake loose,
slowly drift
to the ground.

I'm alone,
by myself,
on an island,
in the center of
the universe;
a universe
of wild dreams,
of hopes,
desires,
of prayers.

I'm alone,
with nothing
but my thoughts.

W. James Beard, Jr.


© Copyright 2000 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
1 posted 2000-07-29 01:35 AM


wonderful...sometimes i enjoy nothing more than escaping to my own little island, just me and my thoughts and dreams and hopes and wishes...great post

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-07-29 04:52 AM


Oh this is fantastic!!    Enjoyed it tremendously!  And that's the best thing to do sometimes!  (And especially sitting under the tree!   - my favourite pasttime!)
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
3 posted 2000-07-29 08:53 AM


My thoughts can bring alot of wonderful images, as did this poem..Great job!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Lynne Dale
Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria
4 posted 2000-07-29 08:58 AM


How can being alone be so crowded? lol. I enjoyed it a lot.
Kethry.

Kethry.
When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole.


brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
5 posted 2000-07-29 09:57 AM


really enjoyed the poem.

I'm sitting under a tree,
listening;
the breeze sighs
through the trees,
leaves rustle,
shake loose,
slowly drift
to the ground.

Your thoughts are sometimes your best companion.

"A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2000-07-29 12:16 PM


Thanks to all the above for your read and comments.  These (and Darkness - No Sound At All) are almost as old as me.  Wrote these back in the 60's (flower power baby!!) when this kind of thing was in vogue and I thought I could write. I'm cleaning out my "archieves", hee, hee, and subjecting you to all the things I care least about.

Again, thanks for your words...

jwesley

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
7 posted 2000-07-29 12:35 PM


James...wonderful read here.  Beautiful imagery.  As for being from the '60's: Don't make me whip out MY poetry from that era!!  Loved it.  Hardrock
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