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Restless Heart |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina 
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Oh restless heart, How you yearn, How you do ache, For your love now lost. Wretched tears flood my face, My soul is unconsolable, My spirit tortured. Promises of eternal love, Vows made then broken. Peace where are you? Comfort why have you abandoned me? Oh restless heart, How you yearn, How you do ache, For your love now lost. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Juliet..beautifully written. Here's wishing you peace for your restless heart. Hardrock |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Hardrock, thanks so much for your kind words. Take care, Juls |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Juliet, this is the first poem of yours I have seen, it is very beautiful. I feel the sadness, so very well expressed here. My heart aches every day, I wish you relief soon for yours.. Catalinamoon |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Catalinamoon, thank you so much for your kind words. I wish relief for your aching heart also. Best wishes, Juls |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Juls, this is so sad. Comfort why have you abandoned me. My wish is that hope comfort and strength return to you. Kethry Kethry. When dark of night steals your soul. Think of me and be made whole. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Kethry, I guess we all go through periods of pain and heartbreak. Some just seem to last longer than others. Thank you for your kind wishes and best wishes to you also, Juls |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The heartache is SO well described here, I can feel the pain while reading this. Just an excellent job, hope your heart is happy soon!!! Hope to see more of your work!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Deborah, you as well as the others are very kind. I've so grown to love my family here at Passions. Have an awesome day, Juls |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Like the words of another Juliet said from a balcony to filter to awaiting ears below...excellent job! EWDrake With a long held breath given dark freedom, the single flame in sorrow's window flickers out. EWD |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I really enjoyed reading this thank you for sharing this very good poem "There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow EW that was beautifully said. Thank you so very much. And welcome to Passions. All the best to you, Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
You're very kind Ginners and welcome to Passions also. Take care, Juls |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Juliet... I'm very impressed!  Great piece of work... thanks for sharing |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Tara, you are too kind. Many thanks to you. All the best to ya, Juls |
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