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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-28 12:34 PM


Another annihilation
Of sin, disease,
Mayhem pronouced
Nothing is orderd.
What brain belongs
This foolish act fails
Attempts to hardend
Moments lost, gone.
You simple minded looser
Attack me with ignorance
Hate boils from you
NO, sorry I would'nt,
Your mothers not that great.
Is that the best you have
Two bit words, for a bity brain.
To bad you'll never know
You'll never understand
The power I have,
Power of love I keep.

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-07-28 12:44 PM


Dealing with small-minded people can trying to say the least. The comment about the mother..Ouch!
Take care. I wish You peaceful thoughts.

Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
2 posted 2000-07-28 03:13 PM


How many times I have said I will not give "that" power to someone else. Thats my interpretation here..Well spoken

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
3 posted 2000-07-28 08:55 PM


This is excellent writing Michael.  I am normally just in Open, but I thought I would pop into Dark.  I am going to have to look  at more of your work.

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-07-28 09:52 PM


I know what you mean. If they just open up thier minds...it can be fustrating..you've expressed yourself well.

Joy

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