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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-07-28 12:03 PM

Liquefied limbs,

Boiling brims,

Luscious love,

Devilish dove,

Serenity seeks,

Plundering leaks,

Closing gates

Endless bates,

Story of mine,

Hanging loosely in time.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

sash
Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 125

1 posted 2000-07-28 12:29 PM

Wow! loved this one. So few words, but telling quite a story indeed!
More!More!

~Sash~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-07-28 12:41 PM

"Story of mine, hanging loosely in time.."
Awesome!

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-07-28 03:23 PM

This was good, thanks for sharing..I liked serenity seeks...Makes me think of that peacefulness we all need.

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

4 posted 2000-08-01 04:42 PM

whhoooo whheee i can't get enough of the nox!! loved this one!! excellent, just simply divine.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

5 posted 2000-08-01 08:20 PM

I enjoyed sharing this one.

John D

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2000-08-01 08:23 PM

I can so relate to this one, this story of yours, not so loosely hung in time after all!! Great stuff

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

7 posted 2000-08-01 10:17 PM

~*BAM*,...whoa. This story of yours is so well told. Brief and strong. Awesome writing. Take care you. *Peace.

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

8 posted 2000-08-01 10:46 PM

Xeo...the great thing about a poem like this is getting beyond the words and into the meaning. Nice job. Thanks for sharing. Hardrock

LOTR
Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 68
New Jersey

9 posted 2000-08-01 11:25 PM

Whoa! Breif but definitly got a point across,love your word choices. Keep it coming

Look back at your past, but don't stare too long.You might not like what you find

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

10 posted 2000-08-01 11:34 PM

Indeed, ride on!

-Jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

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