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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
Once upon a midnight passing Came a love time everlasting There upon the Judas tree Joined with mystery inside me Magic formed and though not often bid the harshest world to soften found the joy, the strength, the bliss to put right all things amiss Helped by angels led by stars As the world went nebula And brilliance for all to see Became my love, magic and me, Kethry. as soon as you feel too old to do a thing. Do it! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Kethry..you DO have the magic!! Beautifully written, great imagery..and I love the Poe you put in poetry. Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Nice one here. I enjoy this one alot. Great work my Friend. DkW |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, the Poe touch is great, and I love the whole thing. Just perfect.. Catalinamoon |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Acceptional poem...very good!!! enjoy your work!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This poem is beautiful! The words flow so nicely..I really like this one!......beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
such a lovely read!! just beautiful!! keep it up!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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