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Dark Poetry #2

Deathy Pale

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

0 posted 2000-07-27 08:28 PM

Deathly Pale

Deathly pale, harrowing the end of life’s trail,
Ghosts are near, day-less drear
Night skies draw near,
Memories fade,
Death’s blade digs deep,
My soul do Death reap,

Lifeblood do seep,
Into the earth I do bleed,
Life’s light into recede,
Into afterlife I sail
Harboring this cheerless shade,
Deathly pale

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-27 10:56 PM

~Hi there again. Oh how haunting, and chilling, and freaky. Cold. Indeed. Well done. Be well D. *Peace.

Lynne Dale
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria

2 posted 2000-07-28 10:09 AM

Deathly pale indeed.
Kethry

Kethry.
as soon as you feel too old to do a thing. Do it!

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 2000-07-28 05:28 PM

Now here is darkness...I especially liked "harrowing the end of life's trail"..you have to know something about plowing to understand that and it's significance. Nice job. Hardrock

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

4 posted 2000-08-02 12:05 PM

very raw imagery here. this is so powerful!! excellent.

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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