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The Rain Echoes My Sadness
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The Rain Echoes My Sadness |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~THE RAIN ECHOES MY SADNESS~ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ The rain performs it's melancholy song tonight for only my heart to hear, lightening flashes across a blackened sky, stars fade in their glory for, my sorrow has darkened their light and their hope, my voices cries out in agony singing a mournful melody soothing and haunting like the rhythm of the rain, violent and empty like the thunder's wrath, alone in a sky of lost dreams and regrets, the rain echoes my sorrow, whilst mimicing the river of my despair, oceans of the cloud's tears tap in surrender against my windowpane, it's cry of love nevermore touches the depths of my paralyzed heart, a slow demise from the rain's tears and my own, drowning inside this coccoon of endless depression *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, I hope you are not as sad as this poem. Lovely words, evoking that feeling of dark lonliness. Take care. Catalinamoon |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
This is an excellent poem, Melissa, I really enjoed it. I too hope you are not feeling such sadness, and if so may your happiness find you soon!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very nice work. I enjoyed the imagery and I always enjoy the rain. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Melissa, This one has a rythem that keep me reading. I love the use of nature to describe feelings. Excellent Job..(-:  )LarBear |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You have penned your emotions very well here Melissa. Great writing! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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tookabear Junior Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 28Mansfield, TX USA |
What an amazing display of talent. This poem was so beautiful.. I was envious that I hadn't written it myself. Wow... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Simply wonderful Melissa. . . I too hope that your heart does not echo the poem. . . Excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone for the replies and the encouragement, and no, I do not feel this way anymore, time heals most wounds Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Lynne Dale Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 114Melbourne Victoria |
So glad you don't feel this way. This poem was so meaningful, mournful and haunting. One of my favourites. Be well Kethry Kethry. as soon as you feel too old to do a thing. Do it! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Melissa..I always enjoy reading your work. Exceptional piece here. Hardrock |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Melissa, a wonderfully written poem. Take care.  "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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