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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Why is my truth something frightening to hide? Why must I love you and still have to lie? If you knew all my secrets would you leave me in need? Are you scared of my love? Can't you feel my heart bleed? My truth stays denied for just a bit longer. My secret stays hidden but grows ever stronger. We hide behind sex, behind friendship and fun. But secrets will out before this is done... |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Whoaa!! Sandra...this is so good. Recognition and acceptance of the inevitable. "But secrets will out before this is done"...a promise, a warning, or just a prediction? Hmmm.....Hardrock |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
wonderful...all secrets come out sooner or later...unfortunatly, the longer you wait to tell the more damage they tend to do...agian, wonderful...keep it up  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
You just keep reading my mind Sandra...Dee |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh do I ever know what the writer is saying here!!! Excellent job!!! Just great Cat!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Sandra......truth be told, many men are scared of love. Great! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Sandra, forgot to say, I think the time is getting near, and I felt that in your verses?? Am I close?? The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
damn girl, you hit the nail on the head with this one. it takes negative energy to lie, yet truth brings negative reaction. thank you again, moonbeam. you remain one of my faves. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Catalina,...(thought I'd call ya that for a change hehe), I can feel this one inside of me...really. That ending just kix! Powerful in it's own way. Super. Take care M. *Peace. |
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