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calro2
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since 2000-07-16
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0 posted 2000-07-26 09:29 PM


"BY YOUR OWN HAND"  
By your own hand, you did this thing.  My heart is broken, no more to sing.  I can't believe you wanted to leave,  Deserting me here to cry and to grieve.  I see your face when you were a little boy,  I loved you so much, you filled me with joy.  We talked and we talked, I thought you understood.  I didn't realize that you never would.  Your mind was so troubled, filled with despair,  I tried to help, you knew that I cared.  My only son, "WHY DID YOU LEAVE,"  I can never know why, I can only grieve.  Every father wants a son, that much is true,  I didn't know I would have you, only to lose you too.

Author: Rose Mary Colarusso
          Copyright 2000


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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-07-27 07:57 AM


Welcome calro2    Terrific poem... but a sad subject.  (By terrific, I meant it is written well - you have obviously put your heart and soul into it)
Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-27 10:36 PM


Calro...Another touching poem of personal loss and pain.  Hope this finds you well...and that you find peace through your poetry you share with us here.  Hardrock
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