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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. 
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for Melanie, Princess of the Moon Deep in the darkness Desolation dreams Envisioning sorrows And conjuring screams Weaving the nightmares Of hopeless decay Keeping the warmth Of your smile at bay Light up the candles That shine in your eyes Sing me the songs That I hear in your sighs Tell me you love me Show me you care And banish forever The ghost of despair Sing while you may |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
A very, very beautiful poem Ian...I love the way it flows with the emotion and it doesn't seem forced. Once again, beautiful! Angel I wish you could hear the child that cries in my flesh and makes my bones ache -Jewel ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! How superb! I liked the way it just tripped along... very easy to ready  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"And banish forever The ghost of despair",....right on! ~Ian,...I like what you call Melanie,...Princess of the Moon,...I just love that. This poem is very neat...it almost sings itself to me. Wonderful work. Be well I. *Peace. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ian, I also really loved that last line. Perfect ending. Beautiful writing. But I always thought I was the princess of the moon Catalinamoon |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Very Lovely writing Deepak |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Banish forever, the ghost of despair..Like that line, love the idea too!! Very nicely done!1 The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Ian...Excellent!! The flow, the rhyme, the message. Great work. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is really, really lovely. I am in awe! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ian, you are soooooo great!! lucky girl to have poems like this written for her. exquisite. loved it. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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