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Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-26 05:35 PM

In fluid of liquid sapphires,
With quill of russet gold,
Penned by seraph fingers
On parchment sere and old,
Immortal words inspired from
The hearts of ancient bards,
In phrases hung with pearl-dust
And hewn from crystal shards---
Would be as naught, Beloved,
If the dream within my breast
Could break the muted silence
And its beauty be expressed!

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-07-26 05:42 PM

Just an awesome poem. Gets one to think, know what I mean?

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

2 posted 2000-07-26 05:49 PM

Rex..The beauty, the structure, the meaning and the message: Perfection achieved. Hardrock

LarBear
Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 138
Kingston, New York

3 posted 2000-07-26 05:52 PM

Hey, I like this one Rex.
Great use of words.

LarBear

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

4 posted 2000-07-26 06:15 PM

How lovely! This is so great! Your words are so elegant.... Simply wonderful.
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

5 posted 2000-07-26 06:29 PM

In fluid of liquid sapphires...loved that!! Just a supreme piece!! Love your work, Deb1

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

ChibiDeathscythe
Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 128

6 posted 2000-07-26 08:14 PM

Rex, you have to be one of my favorite poets in passions. Your poems are very vivid and refreshing.

Would be as naught, Beloved,
If the dream within my breast
Could break the muted silence
And its beauty be expressed!

the structure and rhythm all paint a lovely picture. Awesome work!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2000-07-26 08:23 PM

Wow!!! This is absolutely stunning! I love it....

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