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Pig Skinned Ears Insane
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Pig Skinned Ears Insane |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Pig Skinned Ears Insane She's carried for years your taint. Your pig skinned ears deafly stray, in starless nights of fury. Your bloodied fists swing in time, with gaping mouth of angry fumes. Flooding wooden halls of stuctures, unfinished and alone. Whispering back on times before, lips again in bags of you, twisted, shaped,...untrue. Fear filled glass encasing blame, fire filled pits of your evil games. Objects of your desire, twenty six tales ago, when sunshine shone and warmed your broken soul, and things were happy then. But this suitcase now, enclosed your sins, and alone in the night you wait. Aging eyes and skin the same, endings of your evil games. Silence now and empty chest,and pig skinned ears insane. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You spit the greatest of stuff my friend. Thank you for sharing. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
SF...you are truly the Mistress of Metaphor. "Fear filled glass encasing blame"..what a great line. Excellent. Hardrock |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
SF- How neat! Pig-skinned ears......This poem just rocks. -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
SpitFire, you are taking us deeper inside those dark corners. A really powerful poem, continue to write such gems but take care, too much darkness can be dangerous. Peace ~  "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Fire filled its of your evil games..I agree with Hardrock, the metaphors unbelievable. Again excellent work!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
chilling spitfire .. p |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
that was really great. i really liked "twenty six tales ago...broken soul. that was an awesome line. jann elizabeth |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
There are many powerful lines in this piece. Strongly written, and a great dark read. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
I must admit I had a hard time following the narrative. Selective lines establish inventive descriptions, many well done. The overall passage, however, is a bit scattered not only in the matter of my personal taste, but distracted me while I read. Would you care to share an author's interpretation? Be well. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I have seen this glass you talk of my love. HHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLLLL love this rich and dark corner of your mind kid. and love you. Joel. I'll be around. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You always write the most amazing, and powerful stuff my friend. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow excellent wording and images loved it. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This is indeed a winner! It is obvious by the replies alone, let alone the text. Your writing inspires me, I just love your style. Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i agree with all of the above....this is a great piece..enjoyed it. ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was so amazing!! Another great poem by yoU! Oh and a question.........SpitFire, it's a skater clothing brand........is that what you're named after? Explain that..  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey all,...thank you soOo much for taking the time to read this. It's from a while back but somehow made it's sad little way back up to the front again. Thank you for all the kind words. Oh and Dopey_Dope I have SpitFire wheels on my board and yeah,...that's where the name came from. . Your name reminds me of this song we used to sing when we were really young,...something about bubbles in your underwear,..haha, don't ask. But that's what I think of,...that song. Oh and I like your signature. *Peace. |
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