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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-07-26 12:19 PM


I am a person of vask passion
With little hope
That meer life
Is painful
Although it is how I servive
I could not live any different
I could not live any less
Than what I think I deservive of myself
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Broken_Heart
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands
1 posted 2000-07-26 12:54 PM


Beautiful poem... And if you really feel this way, I understand for I have the same feelings. Short and Great... nuff said...
Sincerely Broken_Heart

Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-07-26 08:12 PM


Neala, the content is very good, but you have some spelling errors..I'd like to offer my help if you like. Contact me via Email or ICQ. Keep writing!    
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