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meara
Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-07-26 11:53 AM


Living life on a rollercoaster
never knowing
who is going to stay
or who is going to go
just hoping
for one perfect moment
to come around the bend
where everything becomes
complete and makes sense



© Copyright 2000 Lisa Ritchey - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-07-26 12:03 PM


That is one truthful statement. I just wrote a similar titled poem, will wait awhile to post it.  
Nice work.
Catalinamoon

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-07-26 12:22 PM


Meara,
It is a good poem don't but yourself done so much.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2000-07-26 12:30 PM


Definitely slice of life....thanks..

jwesley

Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

4 posted 2000-07-26 07:26 PM


Neat...I liked this one quite a bit.  
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
5 posted 2000-07-27 10:17 PM


Meara..very nicely said.  And such truth.  I enjoyed it.  Hardrock
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
6 posted 2000-08-01 10:44 PM


you said it kid.  way to go.  i am in the seat next to ya.  hang on tight cuz here we go!!! LOL  excellent work!!!

kynder

Sunshine can not bleach
The snow,
Nor time unmake what
Poets know.

Ralph Waldo Emerson

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