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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
I've danced closer seen darkness, terror, pain closer the music throbs in a way that strikes your loneliness like strings but I've still danced closer seen fire, ice closer the magic dance can make you cry it plays you like keys but still if you can't dance closer you should dance not at all |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great ways to use dance as an instrument of yours to see the unthinkable. Yea!!!!!!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
But... but... but... I have two left feet! Can't we just make it a s l o w dance??? *wink*  |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
I have always seen dance as a spiritual endevour. This piece echos my thoughts quite closely. Very well done. Sing while you may |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I am at a loss for words, Portia. This is fantastic! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Yes this reminds me of the dances we do in life, I liked the way you used this, very creative!!! Excellent poem!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Portia, just great, as usual. The whole poem, and the last stanza in particular, really got to me. Nice way of using dance to show life, love, etc. |
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