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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-07-25 06:23 PM


The passsion that races
Through my body
As I think about you
A thought of giving up hope
For you are not here
With me

That passion always lasting
Draining my soul of love
Making it almost useless
I wish for you to be here
But that is all I can do
For now

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-07-25 07:03 PM


I know exactly what you mean...I share that passion..James
Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-25 09:22 PM


Many have felt that passion..and that despair.  Good job, Neala.  Hardrock
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

3 posted 2000-07-25 09:28 PM


Hmm... understand what you mean here.  Well written Neala!  
catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2000-07-26 11:00 AM


Isn't it sad, when all we can do is wish, remember, plan for the future. Would that today could be better, for all of us.
Lovely poem, very expressive.
Sandra

meara
Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15

5 posted 2000-07-26 11:18 AM


Neala-
Well the only advice that I can give you is all you can really do is wait.  
-meara

Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
6 posted 2000-07-26 11:27 AM


How we can be driven by that passion, and the desire to want something so badly. Hope things turn out well for you!! I liked this very much!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
7 posted 2000-07-26 11:32 AM


Hey,
Thanks everyone for replaying but like meara said all we can really do is sit there and wait.I guess that is just how is goes.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

ChibiDeathscythe
Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128

8 posted 2000-07-26 02:13 PM


Great work! I can identify with this.
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