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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
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Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2000-07-25 05:25 PM


When the wind blows and whispers through the trees,
Know that I will remember you
When the rain falls and drips from flower petals,
Know I've forgiven you
When the sun sets and glistens on the sea,
Know I am missing you
When a tear escapes and rolls down my cheek,
Know I still love you
When the stars shine and glow in your eyes,
Know I'm dreaming of you
When the brids sing and fly above your head,
Know I will still want you
When everything gets black and night silently comes,
Know I am wishing we never ended

© Copyright 2000 Gin Leigh - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-07-25 05:52 PM


This was really beautiful! Well written, I enjoyed it very much!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-25 08:50 PM


You have again captured the emotion in a very touching poem. I can relate to this as well. You sound sad, take care.
Catalinamoon

tookabear
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 28
Mansfield, TX USA
3 posted 2000-07-25 09:01 PM


From reading your poetry, it seems as though we have a lot in common... feel free to email me if you'd like.  You have an amazing talent, one that obviously is spiced with a lifetime of experiences.  Take care...
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-07-25 09:14 PM


This is wonderful..so full of emotions! I like it very much.  
taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

5 posted 2000-07-25 09:37 PM


LOVED this poem of yours!  
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