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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-07-25 09:01 AM



It IS My Heart

When the morning comes
and with it my light
many thoughts,
my mind views.
I am touched by words,
that I see, sometimes hear
bringing pleasure to me
each day, new.
Each part of me
that is given or shared
comes from deep
inside my skin.
Rhythmic music
is coursing my veins
originating from
heart, that's within.
So to say "it's not"
or "it's only", those words
can sting, can swell me,
my hurt.
And it's moments like those
that I feel in distress
knowing only these
issues to skirt.
Am I "only" to you?
Is that all that I "am"?
If that's so, tell me now,
it's okay.
I can live with those words,
and will hurt for awhile,
for tomorrow's
another day.
M





[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-25-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
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1 posted 2000-07-25 08:37 PM


MMoonchild...I perceive the pain of confrontation, and resolution fueled by anger..and enough hurt for a lifetime.  Nicely done.  Hardrock
Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
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2 posted 2000-07-25 10:02 PM


I like how your words break upon each other, like waves on the shore.
  Good write!!
    Thanx!

Click



MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-07-25 11:33 PM


Hardrock..I was told  it was only  words and not my heart by someone...and of course  we women take things to heart sometimes more often than men do..(*wink I said sometimes)

~~soft thanks
Maureen

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-07-25 11:34 PM


Click..thank you that was a beautiful response
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 2000-07-26 01:39 AM


...those words
can sting, can swell me,
my hurt.


I really liked that! So true, and amazing what words can hurt us the most.

Christopher

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-07-26 09:24 AM


thank you again, Christopher..
yes  words do mean a great deal although they are so easily misunderstood...a  combination of actions and  words...with good intentions are the most meaningful
~~softly
Maureen

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2000-07-26 10:41 AM


Again Maureen, I fully understand this poem. Its  flow, the feeling of the easily broken heart, the wrong words that cause so much pain, even the unintentionally hurtful ones.
You write with your heart and share your feellings with us, and they are very touching.
Catalinamoon

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-07-26 10:57 AM


Having been married as long as I have and having been planted in the same location for too many years...I can only  write from my heart and even from my lack of experiences  although they are much harder to do and therefore become my wishes, dreams and  fantasies

thank you, catalinamoon
~~soft smies
Maureen  

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