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Broken_Heart
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-07-25 07:05 AM


This poem is really important to me... it contains most of my feelings I live with day to day...
Hope you like it and don't get depressed by it!
- Broken_Heart -


What else is there in life...

Solitude I gain from this way of live
What comes to be
What comes to mind
Only wind blows through my bones
Like sorrow corrodes my heart
What shall I do
What should I do
What else is there in life…

Why I am this way I cannot speak
My tongue is lost forever
Words do not come to mind
What I will say
What will I do
I do not know now nor tomorrow
Even if eternity passes by
What shall I do
What should I do
What else is there in life…




Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...

© Copyright 2000 Jean Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
1 posted 2000-07-25 07:47 AM


With all there can be to deal with, I try to find that place where I can obtain a sense of peace within myself..the battle can be as huge as life sometimes, but never give up on you!! The answers are there, is just learning where to find them..Hope you are ok, and this was nicely writen!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-25 08:51 PM


Broken..the question, "What else is there in life?" is asked by many.  I can only tell you, "you ain't seen nothing yet".  Stick around...it gets funnier by the year.  Hardrock
tookabear
Junior Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 28
Mansfield, TX USA
3 posted 2000-07-25 08:59 PM


This sounds so much like my thoughts when I've struggled with depression.  It can only get better!  What a great poem...  I wish you the best.
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