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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas

0 posted 2000-07-25 02:09 AM


Your eyes are that of crystal
Piercing through my soul
I long to touch your heart
But what shall be the toll?

awwwwwwww short but sweet  


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-25 10:35 AM


~Short and sweet is right! Great question DkW, and love the crystal eyes. Be well. *Peace.
Deborah1
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since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
2 posted 2000-07-25 03:44 PM


Hey DKW, yes short but loved it!! Got me thinking for sure...Hmmm I know my toll has been costly at times!! Thanks for sharing, good one!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-07-25 09:10 PM


DkW...this one really is a "thinker".  I just wonder what that toll would be?  Hmmmm  Hardrock
Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
4 posted 2000-07-25 09:57 PM


I've paid the "toll" mind, body,& soul..So far it has been worth it..
   Thanx!!  I liked this one well!!

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