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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-07-24 06:11 PM



        Drawn by you,
         like a moth
        to the flame.

        Singed my wings,
       but I stil remain.

        Erratic flight,
        almost through.

        I won't stop,
     until consumed by you.  
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             Click




[This message has been edited by Click (edited 07-24-2000).]

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a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2000-07-24 08:27 PM


This is so wonderfully beautiful.

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
2 posted 2000-07-24 11:17 PM


a wonderful poem!! i love the way you said "like a moth to the flame" what a creative way to set a picture! nicely written!
MMoonchild
Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
3 posted 2000-07-25 07:27 PM


very nice, Click
~~smiling..love your name
Maureen

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