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Dark Poetry #2

The Corner Table

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2000-07-24 05:30 AM

The Corner Table ( Rubaiyat Sonnet)

Sitting still silences fills the air,
In shadow of sorrow’s despair,
Lost in mood he’ll just brood the night,
Drinking wines as he pines his care.

Smokers share clouding air from light,
Cloak of shade that smoke made hides sight,
But never endeavor to see,
The others his brothers of night,

They don’t wish to exists or be,
The come here to drink beer and flee
From the sight of those light beings,
They are all of reality.

Drink so deep make minds sleep freeing,
Close those eyes that won’t cry seeing.

Gloom 2000

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

1 posted 2000-07-24 07:57 AM

Ive seen many..just wanting to achieve that place of not feeling. This was done very well, I can see the images clearly. Good poem!!!!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2000-07-24 09:50 PM

Deborah1, thank you for the kind words,
glad I could put an image in words for you.

Gloom

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

3 posted 2000-07-25 12:28 PM

Drink so deep make minds sleep freeing,
Close those eyes that won’t cry seeing.

I would share your corner and drink in your darkness with you..anytime
~~softly
Maureen

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2000-07-26 05:29 AM

Thank you MMoonchild,
I'm sure your being there would brighten the small corner of the room.
Glad you could enjoy my humble words.

Gloom

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