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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-07-23 05:27 PM


SWEET DEAMON

In the darkness he holds me
in his arms of exstacy.
His breath
hot, dances upon my ears like death.
His words whispered against my skin
speak to me of pleasure from deep with in.
His teeth tearing at my flesh
is my sweet deamons fetish.
His growel,
deep and low, opens our wonderous hell.
His calling of my name,
by any other,could never send through me icey shivers the same.
His darkness fills me,
steping into his world he is all I can see.
His desire
is what feeds my lascivious fire.
My sweet deamon in the night...
for eternity, upon your wings of exstacy, I shall forever take my dark
flight.

© Copyright 2000 a-alibaster (H.A.R.) - All Rights Reserved
Hardrock
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-23 07:07 PM


Affy...you really are the princess of darkness.  Nice job here too.  Hardrock
catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-07-23 07:18 PM


Chills after reading that. You make him sound so welcoming, thats the really scary part. Loved it.
Cat..

Wren
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since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

3 posted 2000-07-23 11:28 PM


Reminds me of my boyfriend!   Great job! This one's a keeper! (Remember- deamons have feelings too!)
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-07-23 11:39 PM


You know how evil he is, but still you are drawn into him and his world....... chilling and understandable!!    Great stuff hon  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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