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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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Invasion on my cranium War professed inside my chest Memories hurl ammo at my soul Now it's just a gaping hole Shards of shrapnel left behind Embedded too deep for the doctor's knife Surgery can't save hearts like mine *****kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
HI Kynder! OOUuUccchhh .... This is so painful ... Somehow i can identify with the pain u describe here. A really neat piece of work , i must say. ~verve |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
If I could, I would excise your pain with the scalpel of love, close your wounds with the sutures of compassion, and heal you with the dressings of hope. Believe in the power. Very well done, Kynder. Hardrock |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
kynder, come to take shelter in neutral ground.  Ouch, great poem. Take care. "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The emotional scars left after the pain..but I have faith that we can be healed, so always hold on to that, Excellent writing, ALOT said in such a short poem!!! Very good!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, feel ever bit of that pain. You need some happy times, my friend. Powerful words. Cat.. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Very aptly put!!! Well done with few words!! You also know My pain....I can relate to yours!! Thank you for making me see I'm not the only one!! Mind Heart Soul....all feel it when it hurts!! Click |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
WOW sis this is one of the best yet i'm feel bad that i missed this one. this is just a wonderful piece of work. i love the imagery you use and make here. Love BroBean I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Whoah! Cool! |
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