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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
this is just emotions im having today FRIEND My dearest friend We have traveled to places unexplored ecstasy and joy we have emplored. But where are we now I can't be sure Are you still there? My hearts in dispair because I so care. A friendship brought to new levels But do we turn and run now do we chase the sun? or has the battle within just begun? I stare into the grey clouds worried if you'll still be around. My T.V.s blasting yet I do not hear a sound My soul has retreated deep into my mind and no peace I can find as I wait to hear the soft chime of you telling me all is fine..... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
awwwww I can feel your heartache and pain here. This was very sweet. Be strong and remember to always fight for what you want in your life. Okay? If ya ever need to chat.... just page me or email me. I am always here  Peace DkW Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
There are all different levels of friendship..taking the next step can cause fear, as we don't want to lose what we have..Very good poem!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Doubt is a powerful emotion is it not? It makes you think and see things from another angle....hmmm... Thank you for the eye opener! Click |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jane...so well said. Come..sit with us, rest your soul..we'll wait with you for that chime...and share our thoughts and hearts in the meantime. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
hey blue where ya been??? excellent time to come back... sounds like you need a friend. i love the last line... telling me all is fine. i have missed ya girl. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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