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moshpit
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines

0 posted 2000-07-23 08:29 AM


And I will do things you've never heard of.
I will make you laugh again.
I will make you believe that there are still
   good things left in your life.
I will make you believe in your dreams again.
I will let you hold those dreams in your hands as
   a child might hold his dreams in his sleep.
I will restore your faith in yourself.
And in other people.
And I will not make any promises because I know
   you would hate to hear them.
I will show you the beauty in everything.
I will share that beauty with you and you will
   be free.
And you will then see the beauty
Within yourself.

© Copyright 2000 guile canencia - All Rights Reserved
demoninlove
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211
Dehradun
1 posted 2000-07-23 10:02 AM


Cheering and full of the hope and promise. Lovely thoughts
Deepak



Wren
Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312

2 posted 2000-07-23 10:23 AM


How sweet! I love it!  
-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
3 posted 2000-07-23 11:10 AM


Mosh...what an upbeat thought...and so full of love.  Nicely done...bravo.  Hardrock
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
4 posted 2000-07-23 11:40 AM


Very beautiful work here. It makes everything seem so pieceful.  Great words written here.

DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
5 posted 2000-07-24 12:21 PM


Lovely thoughts, and the positive feelings shine through, very good job!!

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

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