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Unseen, Untouched, Unknown
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States 
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Oh my lover how I long for you... Never have I wanted to touch or be touched by someone as badly as I want for you... How can this be? My reality has become consumed with you. Yet you are a fantasy... Unseen, Untouched, Unknown... I am unable to control the feelings you have stirred in me... A fire burns in my heart for you... My mind says no.. but my heart screams why not? Are you my destiny? I know not... And you are still a fantasy... Unseen, Untouched, Unknown. |
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Nick_UK Junior Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 10 |
Is this an internet love thing? I like it... Very good. Hmmm. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Powerful, obsessive emotions...but all fantasies have a basis in reality. Very good writing, Dedreia. Hardrock |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
...and what would existance be with out fantasy? This is wonderfully enjoyable. "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
WOW!! This one I know and feel. Its hard knowing you love, yet not sure if its reality or not! GREAT POEM!!! DkW Keep up the wonderful thoughts Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
The fantasy...how we all have that imagination, yet created from some reality based thought, like Hardrock expressed, excellent writing!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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