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Dedreia
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

0 posted 2000-07-23 04:55 AM


Not sure about this...needed to vent some energy..comments?


I missed you tonight my love...
I feel so alone without you here with me.
As the time passes I feel more and more confused about the way we are.
I want to be with you, but I feel so alone.
This is a tangled mess we have created.
I am so unsure if I should stay
or if I should come to you.
Either way someone will be hurt...
I am so torn...
I feel as if I will explode if I don't have you.
But alas I belong to another.
What am I to do?



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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-23 11:20 AM


Oh Dedreia...I wish I had the answers you seek.  Look into your heart...and do what is right.  Nice expression of the anxiety you are feeling.  Hardrock
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-07-23 11:23 AM


~I agree,...and this seems as if it fell straight from your heart.  Do what's right for you. Be well D. *Peace.
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-07-23 11:34 AM


So full of heart.  Decisions do make life difficult at times.  But yes... follow your heart!!  Because if you dont... then someday you will question why you DIDN'T!  Go for it!!  
DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
4 posted 2000-07-23 12:03 PM


"To thine own self be true!!"

  

Click



catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-07-23 06:34 PM


Oh Dee, I am so close to the same spot. It's a tough one. All I can say is follow your heart. And if you are like me, you will trip all over everything, but sometimes you gotta go for it. Good luck.
Catalinamoon

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