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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-07-23 04:29 AM


Circe's Spell

What makes a man adore
Brings him crashing to the floor?
What makes a man sigh
Leaves him senseless, dizzy, high?
What makes him turn a girl
Into diamonds, dirt, the world?
What makes him give his queen
His life, his joy, and gems unseen?
What makes him sacrifice
His blood, his self, his only vice?

What potent spell is this
That can bind a man
With just one kiss?



Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



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Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 2000-07-23 08:44 AM


Uta..So true.  And like most men, I've been a fool for lesser things.  Said so well.  Hardrock
Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA
2 posted 2000-07-23 11:58 AM


What...indeed!!! Love is the only emotion that can't be faked!!
Good job here!!  I wonder myself.

               Thanx!

Click



Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
3 posted 2000-07-23 01:52 PM



Thank u for giving us the male's perspective of falling in love ... After recent experiences, I was pretty much convinced that the lot of them may be rather incapable of emotions like these.
Anyway, I really like your works!

~verve

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-07-24 02:12 PM


~Uta,...gosh you've nailed this one. hehee.
"Leaves him senseless, dizzy, high?"....love this part,...love all of it. Your writing is always something that I look forward to reading. Be well U. *Peace.

Deborah1
Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653
New Hampshire
5 posted 2000-07-24 02:33 PM


Ive had many positions with men..girl,friend..girlfriend, and I think I have seen alot of emotions run very deep with men, and seen them fall pretty hard too. This was really good, I liked it alot, made me think of many different circumstances I have witnessed. I respect a man non afraid of showing his emotions, thanks for sharing

The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar

LarBear
Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138
Kingston, New York
6 posted 2000-07-24 02:45 PM


lotharingia,

Ahhh, what a question! I am one of those men, and I cant explain it either.
I`ll let you know when I find out...
Excellent poem!

LarBear

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