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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Lonely I feel in the night, < !signature-->Missing your warmth next to mine, I toss and turn in the bed, Not feeling your body next to me, Endless nights have gone without you by my side I grow tried of being alone, Nightmares haunt me bringing to mind your absence, Wish I could have you here to comfort me, Rain filled with tears flood my heart, Insane man I have now become, This is the beginning of what’s more to come, Trembling in fear of not finding you again, Rambling nonsense twenty four seven, Come back to me now that you see, When you left what you done to me. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 07-23-2000).] |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
An expression of the simple truth of missing somebody...I am feeling just the same tonight. Thank you for expressing it so well. "We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Xeo..such beauty, such despair. Really nice poem...with such a sad message. Hardrock |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
such agony the solitary... or is it worse being the one that caused it? you never fail to make me think, dear nox. your imagery remains superb. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, that lonliness, that pain of longing. I know it well. Expressed perfectly.. Catalinamoon |
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