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Click
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-07-23 12:20 PM




        Now your gone,
    I know your all alone.

You can't have someone like me.

    You had your chance,
       you let it go.

You were too blind to see.



[This message has been edited by Click (edited 07-23-2000).]

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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-23 12:23 PM


~Don't know what you've got til it's gone,...something like that, remember? Sometimes that happens and it's a shame. *Sigh*,...short and very to the point. Well done. Take care you. *Peace.

[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-23-2000).]

Hardrock
Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA
2 posted 2000-07-23 01:23 AM


Yes, Click...SpitFire said it best.  Short and sweet.  Hardrock
Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-07-23 01:27 AM


Damn straight!    I say that to all the men that dump me! Go figure!!    Great poem by the way!

DkW


Once there was a darkness
Deep and endless night
You gave me everything you had
Ahhhhhh you gave me light


lotharingia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany
4 posted 2000-07-23 03:40 AM


That's what I say too.
Except being a pessimist (what concerns myself), I imagine that they usually don't *realize* what they've lost.
More fool Them, huh?!


Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo



moshpit
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
5 posted 2000-07-23 08:54 AM


You had your chance,
you let it go.

we all have ours but we just don't get know what it is until..
nice poem, Click.

sash
Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125

6 posted 2000-07-23 12:36 PM


Click, this one is kinda ouchy! I had hoped things were getting better. Liked this poem though.
  

    ~Fruit Salad Annie~

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