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SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

0 posted 2000-07-22 11:01 PM

Fields Of All I Am

In fields of all I am
I am lost upon
a mushroom dome
with moonlight
softly playing
gently teasing
the silver beads
of years past
of twenty four
echoes gone by
of striped candy
and tears
in fields of all I am
I am strolling
slipping through
days upon dragonflies
through fears air
and through you
I am lost, so
very, very
lost, in
fields
of
all
I
am.

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

1 posted 2000-07-22 11:05 PM

Very cool. Awesome poem. Makes me want to take a walk in the fields of all I am....
But it probably wouldent make a post as neat as yours. Good job!

-Wren

The thread of destiny
Unknown by anyone
Unseen by anyone
Winds around your heart
Moist with tears
-Vampire Princess Miyu Theme

Click
Member

since 2000-06-11

Posts 202
USA

2 posted 2000-07-22 11:18 PM

Very visual.  Looks good on my screen,but what I mean is your words paint pictures on my mind.
I see the images as I would a painting.....good work!!  I like it!

       Thanx!

Click

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 2000-07-23 01:21 AM

When will you publish all these wonderful poems? Will you ever share them with the rest of the world...enlightening their souls as you have mine? Superb seems so lacking in praise for this magnificent poem. My heart moves with the rhythm. Hardrock

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

4 posted 2000-07-23 01:29 AM

Great Poem SpitFire!

This one I loved !!!

DkW

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

5 posted 2000-07-23 03:46 AM

What an unbelievable poem!
Lost in you.
But this you is very beautiful, full of dragonflies, mushrooms and dew.
I wish I were lost in you, too!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2000-07-23 05:47 AM

Whether ever this place is that you are lost in continue to be lost there because it sounds like a wonderful and magical place.
loved the poem...

why must we pray
screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

7 posted 2000-07-23 01:57 PM

I simply love the imagery! An absolutely fantastic work!

~verve

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