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Walking eve |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
He lay there in silent desperation For nothing would come to his lips again Those days of breathing ending With his last gasp to me I gained. His was not the first Nor to find out, be the last But his passing moment Shocked me in ernest, that rain bleesed eve. To see him dance in honor Of a life full of decadence That dance then turning To the souls dance of death. And as I held him to my breast And gave comfort for this earth He spoke to me in silence Those words he chose to give. Thus passed he into a world I soon will know A world that may be cruel Or perhaps, one where we are null. And my love for this fair creature Of content and life amazing eyes Shall never be in question For he did kiss me good bye. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Wow!! That is deep...and sad. Thanx!! Click |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
So beautifully sad and loving...... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Michael..I know..and I understand. If this is about you, then I wish for you peace and comfort. Many see death..few ever really know it. Great poem, my friend. Hardrock |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You did a great job here...standing by watching death take someone is the most helpless feeling in the world. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
A sense of loss and sadness.... I still struggle with "death" Nicely written, hope to read more!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
There is pain here, yet behind it great calm. Lovely poem! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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